Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 12:27 pm
So he parlayed all the his descriptive paragraphs about the environment--too bad that remaining 20% was the plot.
The tree, yes, this tree was an incredible tree. It rose up high and mighting with its dripline a canopy for the creatures that inhabited it. On the tree there was a weather-scruffed sign. It pointed nowhere, but I felt I must describe it as I needed some filler to make you think you were buying a book of immense value. Stay tuned while I describe the rest of my backyard and then get to the first point of the plot in 100 pages.
The tree, yes, this tree was an incredible tree. It rose up high and mighting with its dripline a canopy for the creatures that inhabited it. On the tree there was a weather-scruffed sign. It pointed nowhere, but I felt I must describe it as I needed some filler to make you think you were buying a book of immense value. Stay tuned while I describe the rest of my backyard and then get to the first point of the plot in 100 pages.